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Hey, @Tomlk123s. Your clothing store could definitely use some work since there isn’t really anything to see except the small buildings. You could definitely, however, create one building that holds all the buyable clothing items instead of multiple buildings. Another suggestion is adding decoration, more depth and maybe surrounding environment(such as: Terrain). Keep up the great work 
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well thanks, your words really encourage me to make more buildings and things to make my clothes store better
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Okay so… starting menus for homestore are REALLY not needed, people want to just join, find the store almost immediately and then shop for clothes on there.
The store feels very bland, like the kind of bland where you go a day only having crackers and water… the trees are free modeled the stores, the little shops DONT EVEN GOT A FLOOR, the mannequin stands are floating, giving the window roofs different colors dont make it look that unique either… personally to fix this just either make one bigger store or if you redo the little shops (make sure they have a floor too) make it unique and ‘pop’ to the shoppers eyes… Also the layout of the shops kind of suck and the map is a little bit large for people to be walking store to store, people aint going to want to take like 20 seconds to walk to another nearby store.
One thing I’m going to point out that made me completely lose respect for this homestore as a clothing designer myself is that using how DARE you call yourself a clothing designer when you copy clothes from others in the first place. you’re NOT a clothing designer 
Heres some pictures of the clothing so yall can come to your own conclusions (personally this hood specifically i know someone that I used to talk to made this)
I’ve decided to also check out the group itself instead of clicking every buy button to see the names of the clothing and having them all say “COOL SHIRT ON SALE” is so trashy in my opinion.
I also can’t tell you to talk to your designers about it because you are the only person uploading the clothes in your group. I highly suggest you hire actual designers otherwise YOUR store will not go very far whatsoever. If you cant hire anyone because you dont have the funds, learn how to make clothes instead of copying them maybe? theres a ton of videos on youtube on how to do specific things.
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You should go into more depth with the terrain since it’s kind if plain, the walls could look like mountains as well. Also the trees are free modeled, and the stores are just recolored on the top add something unique to all of them.
Edit: when I saw the inside the store I saw that it looks like grass inside with no flooring.
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Hello @Tomlk123s,
Currently the game lacks quite a lot of detail and general aesthetic. Mostly from lack of colouration but also because it lacks general unique building. I hope that I can help list the current downsides that are in the game and help you fix and improve the issues.
Lack of UI detail
This UI could be massively improved, roblox provides you with a range of different fonts, experiment with them and see which one fits best, also maybe customise the menu much more, have a blurred background, or use more colouring to fill up the menu.
Again the UI lacks detail. The UI could have much better positioning and and different unique designs to create a much more professional feeling.
Simple builds
The buildings require some improvement, improve the windows, maybe add a door, use different colours, make it less ‘blocky’ like, try experiment with this and find what you think looks best.
General map layout is very simple, with very little map objects. This is something that could be hugely improved. Add some more objects, trees, paths etc. With the downsides listed and explained, you can now think of alternatives to fix and improve your game. Hopefully this helped you out a bit and I wish you good luck on the clothing stores.
Overall rating: 7/10 
Thx, ill hire some clothe desinger like u said 
This is very hopeful, ill go watch more vids on youtube and i will improve my skills for my next game. It will be a big hit soon. Thanks you too
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