Clothing Advertising game

Hello! a couple of days ago i finished working on my Clothing Advertising game

  • What is it about?

This game allows players to purchase life-time clothing banners that will roll in turns with other clothing pieces on the banner for 15 seconds. Of course everything saves even if the server closes.

  • Why am i making this topic?

Well, i was really feeling unsure about my idea. Even if the game contains gears and points for players who purchase ads or buy other peoples clothing, somehow i feel something isnt right in some way.

Maybe if someone could give me some feedback or constructive criticism, i would really appreciate that :smiley:

https://www.roblox.com/games/7206706165/Clothing-Advertisement

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I mean, naming it ā€˜Clothing Advertisementā€™ intends that the game is made for those who want to advertise, but not buy, so maybe make the name suitable for both those who want to buy AND advertise. Maybe I have your idea confused, but if I donā€™t, definitely consider this.

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hmmm, great point, would ā€œClothing Marketplaceā€ do better?

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Sounds great to me!
character limit

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In my opinion itā€™s fine, it works pretty well with everything around it, iā€™m wondering why there were random gears inside transparent blocks because it says +??? ads underneath them.
(I donā€™t buy 6+ robux shirts/pants so maybe you should make it 1 robuck cheaper.)

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The gears show the rewards you get for purchasing, i was going to add more over time.
And yes, i put the red shirt there for testing, i could definitely lower the price

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The tricky thing is, this game needs a whole lot of people for it to have a purpose.
Who would need to purchase an ad inside a game with 20 visits?

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Could you advertise it, maybe?

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I ran some test ads, pretty low CTR since this game targets Designers and Homestore Owners. I was going to run another test soon

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Yeah. The tricky part will be getting a good reputation on the game

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Exactly, and gaining trust too will be hard

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Love the concept, however, it feels a little boringā€¦I suggest you add minigames or some type of rp area (or both) or really anything thatā€™ll make people want to stay in the game and come back as well.

Overall, great job :slight_smile:

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Thanks for the feedback! i was thinking of doing that in the future

Itā€™s an interesting idea. Though there arent a lot of players that are developers that are playing roblox. When someone joins there wont be a lot of people, so it wont be worth it to pay for an advertisement. Itā€™s a good idea but it will be really really hard for devā€™s to find and come to this game regularly.

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I love this concept!

Do you promote your game on social media such as Twitter? That would give your game lots more exposure. Noticed the leaderboards were a bit buggy on my device but other than that its great! Keep up the great work!! :smile:

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Hi! just stopped by to say that I love the idea of this project, the concept is immensely unique and I would love to see the game grow more in the future. Going off on a tangent, not my room to suggest but it would be cool if there are branch stores in-game where an individual can rent a mannequin for 1 week or an option of how long you want your clothes to stay on that mannequin and when the time exceeded to over 7 days the mannequin will automatically reset to having no ID, just a concept of mine.

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Thanks alot for your feedback! i will write all these ideas down for the future!

thank you so much! i could try twitter but i dont think my tweet will break through

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True, ill add some minigames to the game and more stuff to to then ill try to run roblox ads