Clothing commission's done in this week, Feedback on them please?

These are my designs below.

Hoodiee
Military

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Don’t wanna insult your work, but something just irks me about this. It’s not bad by any means; it just feels kinda, uninspired. not really a good word to describe my feelings about it, but it just feels very generic. like those clothing items you see stolen and reposted a thousand times over.

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I actually really like the hoodie. Maybe could have some more details on it but i really like it.

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What? It’s my own design so it can’t be reposted or copied. If you have proof of me copying send it here. :rofl:

Lol, the way both outfits are two different drawing styles

The Blue Hoodie:

  • I like the texture on it
  • Maybe add more shading ruffles or creases
  • Raise up the pocket
  • Add stich like features to the pocket
  • Make the Jacket strings stand out

The Military Uniform

  • Add shading
  • Maybe make your line art color somewhat matched with the colors of the uniform or overlay it so it automatically matches it
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You should shade towards the corners lightly to add depth to it

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