Comments on my Second GFX

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#1

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Hello everyone, here I have my second GFX I hope you like it and give me an opinion about my second GFX

Thanks for watching

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#2

Pretty good for your seconds GFX. You should use more lighting and maybe put more attention on the character itself than the backround. Good job though.

#3

Thanks for your opinion and if in the next GFX I will try to place more lighting and perhaps pay more attention to my character

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#4

It is good for a second GFX way better than me. But feedback Zoom the character in more so it isn’t floating also blur the background a bit, so our attention isn’t drawn to the background.

Instead of a swirly background use a sunray background it fits in with a GFX like this. Try and make the glow not that much visible in your editing software.

Also, try a different pose instead of what I assume to be a pointing pose

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#5

Lighting for the character is basically all you need.

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#6

I also see a watermark at the bottom 0.0 might wanna delete that

#7

I honestly do not like the background. it doesnt fit with the character. If you are looking for a background, I suggest using the colors on the character as one. Nicely done! 8/10

#8

This is better than most 2nd GFXs! There are some things you can improve on though.

  • Background is far too distracting. It drives my focus off the character. I recommend completely changing it since it doesn’t match at all.
  • Character lighting could definitely be improved! That comes with time, however.

Most other suggestions I have are probably too advanced for now. 8/10 for a second GFX!