Not to be rude or anything, but I don’t think having a color changing script or a leaderstats script can really qualify you as a scripter. They are really basic and tutorials on how to make them can be found EVERYWHERE. If you have other scripts, I’d love to see them.
Also, keep off the capitals (Don’t make every word in the sentence capitalized) and space out the commas like this: blah blah blah but, blah blah blah. This will help your portfolio seem more professional and people will take you seriously.
I also recommend adding more pictures to your portfolio (You say that you can make a egg hatching system, show an example of that!). It gives that “experienced vibe”.
I don’t want this to come off blunt, but I definitely think you should improve your script showcase. You state that you’re able to create a egg hatching system, however you give us an example of changing a part’s colour and adding leaderstats. I think you should include an example of your egg hatching system as that will allow users to get a better understanding of your ability.