Looks good, but I think you should change some of the people faces. The girl who is cleaning the mess is smiling happily while a customer falls. Also, this is more me nitpicking but she is using a broom to sweep up a liquid mess I’m assuming. (If it’s not please ignore this part.) Also, near where the falling man is holding his ice cream his hair messes up, it has some orange stuff on it. Another nitpick is that one of the cashiers/workers there has woman’s hair on and the sparkling teeth face on. I don’t get why. I’m not a professional obviously but I can tell you did a really good job on this.