This was a commission piece of a cafe game thumbnail!
I’m looking for feedback! Preferably from someone who has had past experience with UI design, however, I’m more than happy to accept feedback from a customer point of view if one has no experience in design.
This looks amazing, great job with the poses.
I like it! Maybe a shocking face should be on the woman as well! I really like it good job!
Thanks! I tried the shocking face on the woman, however, it didn’t fit well into the scene.
Yeah I can see what you mean, she just saw it and her face wouldn’t react that fast. My bad lol! Good job, AMAZING work xD
Great job with the shading in the different character! I’d give it 5 out of 5 stars 
Great job! I don’t think you’ll need to change anything.
It looks very good. The lighting is a bit odd and the render character renders look a bit blurred. Other than that it looks amazing!
Thanks, I believe the renders are a bit blurred because of dev forum, what part of the lighting is odd btw?
It seems as if the sun light is not reaching the corner, I do see the tree but there should be a little more light there. It looks a but unnatural with the bright sun then nothing in the corner.
Looks good, but I think you should change some of the people faces. The girl who is cleaning the mess is smiling happily while a customer falls. Also, this is more me nitpicking but she is using a broom to sweep up a liquid mess I’m assuming. (If it’s not please ignore this part.) Also, near where the falling man is holding his ice cream his hair messes up, it has some orange stuff on it. Another nitpick is that one of the cashiers/workers there has woman’s hair on and the sparkling teeth face on. I don’t get why. I’m not a professional obviously but I can tell you did a really good job on this.
I think it’s very good! No changes to what I think.
how much did it cost? Cause, I might consider planing out a commision with you.
The only thing you need to know that it looks great.
