Constructive Criticism on my Models

[TmsDevv (Tms)]

I’m building a game and I’ve made a few models for it. The game is supposed to be realistic and I’ve tried my best to create an optimized-realistic design.

Images

Theme is SCP/ Horror

I wanted to do a more unique design for the server, what do you think of it?

The models are made in Roblox Studio, but I converted them to mesh parts.

What can I change to improve them? Any constructive criticism is welcome!

Have a great day
-TmsDevv

[Crazedbrick1]

It’s just like my building style!

1. I think the server has too much diamond plate. I think it would look better if you switched the metal and the diamond plate. Make sure to add a glass window in there as well!

2. The shelfs don’t look very stable. Try adding a 3rd row of supports down the middle.

[MyHeadisMelting]

Looks good but like you said ill some crit

• The diamond plate looks ugly try using something else like glass or something else
• try adding some scribbles on the name tags on the file drawer.
  Other than that your good.

[TmsDevv (Tms)]

I did have a glass window on the server, but it didn’t seem worth it, but I will add one again!

[YummyBurger699 (woopa)]

I like it I don’t get anything to complain about it, to be honest, maybe the third picture could use the texture from the first and fourth picture if that makes sense.

[TmsDevv (Tms)]

The second picture is a picture of all the assets, wdym?

[YummyBurger699 (woopa)]

Sorry about that just changed it

[TmsDevv (Tms)]

The office drawer already has a texture on it.

[YummyBurger699 (woopa)]

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It will be a good idea to add a texture to it cause it looks kind of a place with the other ones.

[TmsDevv (Tms)]

I will keep it in mind, thanks for the suggestion