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Hmm, in my opinion, story games are prettyâŚover used. Instead of monster, how about something else? Maybe just an illusion of mind?
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For the lobby, you could make the tunnel inside of a wall and use a different sky box.
You could name the game Monstrosity also.
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You could name the game Monstrosity also.
Wow! What a cool name! Iâll definitely think about it.
For the lobby, you could make the tunnel inside of a wall
Can you please send some images for refrence?
and use a different sky box
What skyboxes do you suggest?
The school shouldnât be called âschoolâ. Itâd be cool to see a name for it.
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Inside of a wall. Sorry for the bad example, made this really quick just to show.
For the skybox, you could make it just a regular blue sky. You can even use the default sky if youâd like.
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hmmm
- Delete âLoadingâŚâ text in loading screen, it doesnât make sense since there already a intro text
- Decorate the lobby, itâs really blank, maybe try to make a gamepass shop or donate bard
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Ok you should change the skybox it doesnât really fit with the low poly models.
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I get what you mean, but for now, Iâm just going to keep it simple and name it âSchoolâ 
Thanks for the feedback! Iâll use a cartoony Skybox
Okay! Iâll consider doing it later, because I am working on the game itself at the moment.
Great job, although there are many story games I recommend making yours unique and hopefully itâll grow!
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Looks really cool, i recommend if your keeping it low poly to use a sky-box without clouds but still matches the lobby your going for!
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Lobby ideas:
.Replace the font for a more simplistic font (such as gotham black)
.Give the school a name, as @izNatt suggested
.Add small plants to the school grounds
.Make the school grounds bigger with a parking lot
.Add an equipment box where you can buy tool gamepasses
Story ideas:
.After finding the enemy you need to hide in some alleys but a swarm of zombies/monsters/demons or goo is rising, and you need to do an obby along fire escape ladders on the sides of buildings
.You eventually meet a hero who can help you
.It ends with a boss battle and possibly a cliffhanger
All the rest seems great! I canât wait to try out the game when it is public. Keep us updated!
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I want a real story game with real character development, good writing, and gameplay this is what I think a story game should actually be regardless if its an hour or 5 hours long
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@SoundWaves_KGH To answer your question, itâs custom, I canât PM you because youâve âblockedâ me.