I tried to get creative with it. :))
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Erm… I’m not sure what to say about this without coming off as rude, so I’ll just give you some pointers, black text on black background in design is never a good idea, makes it hard to read what you’re trying to convey. Erm… the clouds, or graphics… it’s a bit low quality, and there’s like a whole lot of it that makes it very off putting. And I’m going to be honest, I don’t really think this idea is creative at all, its just graphics spanning over a black screen, and black text, with a “start” button. Sorry to say but you kind of missed here…
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Its a good attempt on a landing page but, the background animations of the white “objects” really kill the theme.
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Ok, thanks for your opinion 
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