Hello Developers,
I made a Cozy Winter Cabin and I would like to hear your opinion about it,
Feel free to criticize constructively or non constructively, up to you.
However, I do want to know what do you think is missing, my main focus is to try and find out what is missing in what I do.
I have spent about 12 hours making this game, it’s my first time building a house so go easy on me
This house looks great! I hope to build like you some day! Sadly, I’m not able to play the game at the moment, so I’ll give you feedback from the pictures!
The fence post parts are all the same material. Try using wood planks for the top part of it to give it some contrast.
The smoke coming out of the chimney looks like beams, causing it to look sharp and unrealistic, I would recommend using smoke or a custom particle emitter.
The flower pot looks like it’s floating and it’s not being supported by anything. Try adding some posts to support it.
That’s one thick door! The indentions look very deep and defined. I would make it a lot more shallow to make it more realistic.
Two brick parts aren’t aligned correctly.
Two of those parts aren’t aligned correctly with the other parts.
This build is very well designed and modelled. It’s completely full of detail; I can see why it took you 12 hours to complete.
I agree with points 2, 3, 5 and 6 from @Crazedbrick1’s post. I don’t think there’s anything wrong with the fence in terms of its material or colour because it’s not the main focus of the build; it looks fine as it is considering it’s still well modelled, and I think the door looks fine since it doesn’t look overly thick to me.
I don’t think anything is missing as such. I think to improve the showcase as a whole you could make improvements to the lighting and the ambience (you might want to add additional sounds) to improve the game’s atmosphere.
I rated the work as a 9 - if you made improvements based on the feedback above I’d easily rate it a 10; the building is excellent.
