Criticism On Jet (Saab-39 Gripen)

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#1

Hello
Straight forward thread, please review my plane and assist me in improving it
Thanks!
100% CSG

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How much could i charge for this? Took me 6 hours to do it
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#2

You should place a logo on the top small wings like you did on the bottom.

#3

I just want to start off with that this looks very good and pretty close to the real thing well done for that :+1:!

Some hopefully helpful suggestions:

  • Maybe add a number on the tail wing like in the reference image.

  • I understand that you need to make the flaps stand out so it doesn’t just blend in and look like they’re not there but the colour you made them doesn’t match the reference image.If your going for realism you might want to fix that and find another way of making the flaps not blend in.

  • Maybe make the black glass transparent and add a bit of interior whether or not it’s detailed.Might be cool.

  • I don’t know much about planes but the point on the end of the plane’s nose looks like it’s quite a bit longer than the one that is in the reference picture.Idk if that’s just me though.

  • The nose/front(idk correct terminology) of the plane also looks a bit too long compared to the reference picture but… If I wasn’t comparing it to the reference picture I think it looks just fine how it is and might look weird if you shorten it.

  • Could you show the bottom of the plane so I could give some suggestions on that?

It looks great to be honest and you did a good job replicating it in roblox. I found it incredibly difficult to find things to improve. Your work is amazing :+1:. Good luck in improving this plane and in future projects.

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#4

Looks great, one noticeable thing you could add is the front of the jet has a nose painted a bit lighter than the rest of the jet.

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#5

That’s actually incredible. :+1:

Honestly, I can’t find a price tag for this. It must be really high.

Oh, and the nose seems too long.

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#6

I agree. The nose is the one part of the jet that looks different from the original.

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#7

The Build

The nose does seem a bit longer than the reference image. The main cabin/cockpit is a bit more narrow. If you widened it, maybe the nose won't appear as long. The rudder should have the number of the airplane. Also, put the logo on the sides of the plane. Optional: make the cockpit window more transparent.

Pricing

That is a very nice build and at 10$ an hour for 6 hours would be 60$. I'd Price it around 50$ to 80$. As in robux, 20,000R$ to 30,000R$.
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#8

How can you get those curves I have a hard time with csg to get smooth edges. Is there meshes for this?

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#9

Hard work and long time pays off my bro!
Try F3x for doing unions

Thank you all for replying.
Known issues are the nose and the cockpit
Thank you so much for the criticism!, i will improve!

#10

Looks amazing, a pretty good replica. Will look great with ROBLOX’s new lighting system.