Like I said in my previous post, Criticism makes a person stronger.
Soooooo…
CRITICIZE MY BUILD!
Roast it, harshly criticize it. I will take it into account.
Made with Roblox CSG
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5 Likes
Could have some more detail on the support structures (those blue stick things). The thickness ratio of the roof is not the same. Could also add some more detail on the floor. That stone wall at the back there doesn’t really fit. That structuring under the “bump” part of the roof is good, although kind of “out of place” considering the build’s style. The benches seem nice though.
Overall rank: C+
2 Likes
(criticism with all the love in my heart)
- ReaRepeatingpeating pattern in the background could look better (more organic, there is a setting for that)
- its basic. No (3d) grass, no flowers, or trash can etc…
- fence in the back looks more realistic than the gazabo, what style are you going for?
- why is the back of the gazabo walled off? (also its shadow looks weird)
- the meal, square supports remind me of a school bus dropoff
- The metal makes it look industrial but you added wooden benches, maybe try and pick one or the other?
(Im sorry)(It looks fine, I just made up flaws for the sake of criticism.)
4 Likes
Give the Roof some depth, it looks very flat, add more angle to them, there are supposed to displace rain not store it above our heads. Add guttering. add more depth to the pillars, perhaps a concrete slab that the pillars sit on for support, and framing for the roof to attach to rather than just the pillars. a few ideas you could add.
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I would do some minor updates to the benches, and i would add some depth to the roof to make it a little more realistic. I would also try to position it i n a spot where the shadow is not looking weird. But good luck on the project or game
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Thank you.
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It looks good. I think you should add some ceiling lights to it though, and also add trash cans around the place.
no detail, no variety, random arch in the middle
add props and blend with the terrain around it
Add more details and decorations I guess? Also me personally don’t know what’s the purpose of ur model or what place is that? for what? that’s it bro but keep up! grind more!