Hello everyone! I did my first commission today with @Ashp116! I’ll love some constructive criticism on it!
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There’s no alien on that spaceship.
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very epic builds, I can only build a brick. Very great job on them :>
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Very nice for a first commission, the red and white building looks a bit plain
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That build isn’t part of the commission. It’s only the UFO.
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Oh I’m sorry, I was looking at the stuff in the background too. Not sure why I was looking there since the ufo is obviously the commission 
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I like the UFO, although you should add a control panel to the UFO if that’s possible. But all and all it looks good!
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Looks cool! I think I prefer changing the diamond plate part to metal because it looks stretched out and the red neon part on the 1st picture should be Forcefield.
One last thing: You should experiment colors in the neon parts instead of red for more “alien-ish” colors like blue and green, unless that’s the commissioned detail.
Keep up the good work!
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The aliens are the players, I have a test game to test the UFO, but the only problem is that the tilt needs some time 