Criticize my showcase

vitorhinode1234 · February 3, 2021, 4:35pm

Say everthing i need to improve.

This is a showcase, is an full test of ROBLOX Engine.
every review are accepted, i’m prepared for every review.

Here is the game, this is a demo not a full game.

Another update!

i’m proud of myself.

Dualillusion · February 3, 2021, 4:38pm

I-I am left with no words but to say, this is above and beyond 10/10

vitorhinode1234 · February 3, 2021, 4:40pm

Thank you , I am happy to be good.

AndroitSK · February 3, 2021, 4:41pm

Maybe some flowers to add or rest benches? I don’t know what you should add either because it’s nice.

24kDreams_brxken · February 3, 2021, 4:41pm

Honestly I can’t see anything you need to improve just wow!

rottendogDkR · February 3, 2021, 4:41pm

The water does not look real compared to your grass and trees. Other than that is is good.

vitorhinode1234 · February 3, 2021, 4:41pm

Yeah i’m thinking about that, anyway, thanks for helping.

vitorhinode1234 · February 3, 2021, 4:42pm

Thanks! I appreciate your review about this.

vitorhinode1234 · February 3, 2021, 4:43pm

well, i dont think so, how i can improve that?

rottendogDkR · February 3, 2021, 4:44pm

I meant that ice or water in the middle of the rocks. Sorry for the confusion.

Sir_Highness · February 3, 2021, 4:48pm

Get rid of the depth of field blur in the far distance? Unless your game is ‘nearsighted person simulator’.

marsdonh_alt · February 3, 2021, 4:49pm

you can improve by not changing anything here its PEEEEEERFECT
all perfect but this in the second image

vitorhinode1234 · February 3, 2021, 4:53pm

i’ll be looking that. thank you

vitorhinode1234 · February 3, 2021, 4:56pm

Heh, thank you your review is important to me!

isaiahbur · February 3, 2021, 5:04pm

I can just barely see a few bushes in these pictures because they’re all so blurry.

But to me it mostly looks like just some decent trees with nice lighting it seems to be missing a lot of foliage and underbrush.

Now I know this isn’t the exact style your going for but notice the underbrush around all the trees. It feels pretty empty without this just relying on terrain grass to do the job.

Other than that the trees look nice and lighting was done well for the pictures I agree that the blur needs to be toned down a bit.

vitorhinode1234 · February 3, 2021, 5:07pm

So, i get rid of amount of intesity of Depth Of Field.

And yeah, i noticed is something missing, i will do that, thank you, thats really helped

Gatorzgaming · February 3, 2021, 5:08pm

Thats a roblox terrain problem OP can’t really change that untill they let us make custom water textures

4EHE · February 3, 2021, 5:09pm

Looks nice, but definitely add more foliage, also make it a little brighter. Looks great! Keep up the good work!

vitorhinode1234 · February 3, 2021, 5:10pm

Yeah! i definitely will add more foliage, this is what i noticed missing. Anyway thank you!! This help amount!

bogotesr · February 3, 2021, 5:19pm

Amazing! The blur is nice but I would make it slightly less blurry, I feel like some things that are close should be a little farther before they get blurred.