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#1

I would like if you criticize this GFX, thanks.

crane thingy
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#2

What is that beautiful man on the picture? And why is this ro-gangster wearing blue glasses. I don’t know if it gives him clout. However, his silver chain expresses his richness and swag :sunglasses:

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#3

Looks kinda good for me. The blue shades doesn’t really fit the theme of the GFX at all. Wish to seea more dark style shades type of sunglasses.

Add shadows at wherever possible to give the more realistic look

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#4

Haha, I’m that beautiful man. blue glasses fits me so good.

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#6

This is actually my favorite shades and didn’t really want to change them that’s why I kept them here, about shadows noted.

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#10

floor looks kinda flat for bricks

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#11

The floor is what is bothering me, try fix that, it looks too smooth, and try make your shadows relative to your clouds

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#12

hat looks cool, you can chance up the background to make it better

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#13

I think the guy there looks more like a wanna be ro-gangster. The glasses don’t fit him very well but I think the background is really good.

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#14

The direction of the lightning of the sky does not match with the direction of light in the scene(See the shadows of the sky and of the scene)

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#15

Actually no, I wasn’t trying to be a ro-gangster. I don’t have models to use in my GFX that’s why I always use my avatar and sometimes it doesn’t fit the theme.

#16

textures are low qualiry, did you use photoscanned objects?

#17

Judging from the atmosphere the shading doesn’t look correct, if you’re going for a dark cloudy day I would render this with barely any shadows, It just doesn’t work together, but overall It’s a decent gfx.

#18

Honestly, I am not going to criticize you, but-

  • What is that picture of an old man, I feel like it does not feels the aestheticness of your GFX. Perhaps, you should put pictures of something that is connected with the game.

  • Overall, it is great. I love it!

#19

Oh I see. I think the you did a good job then.

#20

The sky in the background looks off, I would probably add a few buidlings behind the fence. But it’s still a great GFX!

#21

Looks good, but if you look closely, his left foot is clipping through the fence.

#22

That was planned, but time wasn’t in my side so I had to do this and thanks.

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#23

I actually noticed that and didn’t really think it would matter so I got lazy to fix it

#24

This gfx is really good. The quality is immaculate.