Critique my cartoony tree

I tried making a tree that you would usually see in a simulator. Please leave your critiques in the replies. What can I do better? What is bad about it? What is good?

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The tree has nothing going for it, it looks stiff, the leaves lack and the wedges on the bottom are even and unnatural. Maybe you can add a little bit of imperfection and a bend to the tree, and more leaves?

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Looks decent! I can see you went for a simple design. <Maybe check out this tutorial- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wB0VgyN8tOw
May be helpful.

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Thank you for the feedback! I will take that advice and improve in the future!

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It looks a little simple but should go well for a simulator!

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Well for be a cartoon tree, is nice, but i sugerest more leaves of cartoon obviusly
Good Luck :123:

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hey, for the leaves try changing it to blocks to collide with the trunk, and make the trunks width smaller.

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Blender is a great way to build cartoony trees.

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Looks great for a fun and friendly simulator! I love the simple and cartoonish design.

An idea: You could make seasonal variations of the tree, like add flowers to it for Spring, change the color of the leaves for Autumn, and removing the leaves altogether for Winter.

I do agree with @Abysmallow about the wedges at the bottom of the tree. An imperfection to them would be better.

Hope I helped & good luck! :smiley:

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Overall if it’s your first attempt at creating a tree it’s good. The only thing I would change is the leaf part they look to circle like simulator trees tend to have variety of shapes and a more proper structure. I would add more leaves to it to give it that theme your trying to achieve.

Since your going for a cartoony look, maybe try making them longer and have different shapes other than having three leaves connected on the tree, consider adding more to have a more natural look.

Thinner branches could possibly improve it looking at a few reference images could give you ideas. Overall, it’s a great start to making a cartoony tree.

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its very simple, the trees in simulators are low poly, and you could of added slight detail and maybe changed the material

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