Hello! Please critique my art, I’d very much appreciate some tips on how to improve. 
(mivorii is the name I use for the majority of my art socials so please excuse the water mark)
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WOW, its so cool and the shading is amazing, the only tip I can give is the head in the first one
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They’re adorable! I love it so much, great job.
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The art looks nice! I just have two issues. On the top drawing, the chin looks too sharp. And on the second one, I think there should be some shading just below her finger.
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Oh wow thank you so much, I didn’t even notice that there should be a shadow under her finger
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beautiful works of art. I love the color palette. I love the art style. I love everything about this! I think I dont need to critique anything. This is by far the best it can even get! Amazing job!
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ur artworks r vrry nice!!
some suggestions i have is making the shading more intense on the green sleeves in the 1st picture, especially with painting-like art. the intense shadows combined with the lighter colors give it more pop to the art
idk what u draw with, but in the 2nd picture the lines are slightly wobbly =P judging by no pen pressure it could be with a phone/finger but idk lol
there should also be a slight wrinkle on the right sleeve, and i feel like the shading is too soft in some areas. make sure ur not overshading 
theres some subtle pillowing in some parts of ur artwork (neck in 2nd image and bust in 1st) and just so u kno u dont need to shade all sides when something’s right next to an object; the shade could fade off into the lines
thats all i have for now, if i continued i would be here for an hour struggling cause im bad at explaining lol
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Just one thing I have to say! In the first image the lineart looks off.
It looks a bit sketchy (LOL I know) instead of a final thing if yk what I mean.
I love your art style :))
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These are so good, I am literally in love with your work.
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Hello! I love your art so much and I love the styles your going for! When I look at it, it makes me smile because of the composition and facial expressions! The only thing I can think of is that i prefer more thick line art with the style your going for, otherwise it’s good!
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