Deleted this because its not useful anymore
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It looks very ugly with the granite texture used for the walls, and it is very dark, and only benefited by neon. I suggest more variety, organization, and better design. Also, try embedding the text into the wall.
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This game looks empty, dark, and free modeled. I recommend you to make decorations and make the better walls.
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Sorry, but it feels nothing like a vibe club. The wall colour, texture and lack of objects/detail makes the game feel more like an interrogation centre than a place of relaxation.
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Starter Builder? Sure why not
I just came out of it
From any Developer viewpoint, it does look basic because of
-long corridors
-high ceiling
-thick neon path lines
-lot of space
There is potential to add much more, and 5 hours of work is not bad considering you are new. Maybe not an Official Club game, but you can use the place as a group base/hangout area. You can start by looking up existing clubs and getting inspiration to add more to the entrance, and use the space 
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In all honesty, it seems like you’ve put effort in but the game just seems very plain and visually unpleasing.
The ceiling is just a neon part; no club would have a bright white light as a ceiling, so it would be much better if you actually built a ceiling and added details under it to make it look decent.
The text signs are floating off the walls. The bed, chair and desk are also floating above the floor. The walls next to the door at the entrance are uneven and have alignment issues. The rooms themselves also have a variety of different alignment issues. On top of this, the walls in the main room are uneven in length.
The main room is very empty; it’s quite wide and spacious yet only features a few chairs in the corners and nothing in the centre or on the other side of the room.
I used the term visually unpleasing because there are only three colours in this entire place; white, black and red. I’d recommend you fix the issues I’ve listed and add a considerably greater amount of detail to the game in order to improve its quality.
I’m also fairly certain I’ve seen the bed before in another place. I’m not accusing you of using free models, but when the bed is of much higher quality when compared to the rest of the build and it looks familiar, it does raise my suspicions.
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Ima starter thank you for feed back
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I used 0 toolbox i used f3x and ThreeDText
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Out of curiosity, how come the bed is of higher quality than everything else if you didn’t use the toolbox?
To reiterate, I’m not accusing you of anything, I’m simply curious.
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For a starter builder it’s good, you’re on the path to becoming a master builder!
For tips, change the walls and ceiling. The ceiling almost looks godlike because it’s just one big light. Maybe change the walls texture/color and add wall design. You can find wall designs on Google.
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These are my recommendations.
- Use fabric or wood planks for wall texture
- Makes the neon outlines a blue/purple-ish color
- Add more decoration to the rooms
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Oke thank you for feed back Its helped 
My friend helped with bed and desk
The game and the images you provided, it looks pretty basic and empty, the materials and colors need a change, for a starter build, i can give this a 4/10, but still keep up the work.