Give me ur opinion from this and visit the game if you would like to 
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Hey,
I must say it’s very little to say anything about it. But if you made the palm and the chair yourself then it’s a pretty good start. You should consider adding some graphics like blur bloom Sunrays etc… that will help make it look even better.
I hope this helped you.
- Cheerful
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Good idea, I’m going to update it a little.
Deserts do not usually have water, but if you’re going for an illusion then use blur. There is not a whole lot to judge so perhaps add more things in the desert (abandoned buildings, mines etc)
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I think he is trying to make an oasis.
Ahh yes thats what I meant by illusion haha. They usually do not have chairs or trees near the oasis and usually have cactus (cacti?) nearby
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I made the lighting look more realistic.
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Hey!
This is very small island, and it gives me good vibes not gonna lie. I like it personally, the terrain fades nicely, if you made everything yourself good job.
I would recommend adding more to the scene, as its very dull on content. Maybe a small cabin, expand out the water, and make a dock with a boat next to it?
That’d make this scene even better than it is now, in my opinion of course.
Good luck!
I think this is on the Lonely Island topic of mine I suppose?
Hey,
I just played it and the Color correction was to strong or the bloom was too strong. Fix that pls. Also try changing the grass Color to something more realistic as it’s too strong. The blur was little bit it did a good effect. Also change the transparency of the water as right now it looks like it’s solid rather than liquid and see through.
I hope this helped you.
- Cheerful
Yeah, it is. The fog is a nice touch as well.
I’m fixing the problem right now, so come back soon.
Ok, I fixed the problem now and made the sun on the desert look more warmer.
Closed game please open it so that we can test it.
I made it public now, so you can see it.
Firstly, it’s a pretty good start don’t know if this has been mentioned above but, it’d be great to look at a few reference image before starting to build a oasis so you could accomplish the realistic look. There are plenty of different types of deserts and how they work match with the setting. I’d recommend playing around with the material colors to capture a good look.
Overall try placing more objects as it’s a bit early to ask for feedback on something in early progress, I’d suggest just trying to create things to your best ability and making many variety of tree models as it’ll take make it less empty add plants something that looks great. Anyways at the start there isn’t much to say are you using a image to create this? If not i’ll recommend using a few.