Does the timing on this piece work?

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#1

Hello people of the forums, this is my first post here so I’m excited to see what it’s like.

I just made a new piece, experimenting with a few new things including the timing. I’m here to get a second opinion on if that Idea really turned out.

Intended to be used on the main menu screen of a space/ sci fi game.

Sorry about all of the dead space after the song, I had some muted prototypes that I didn’t delete.

Made on garage band.

If you are going to use this somewhere, please credit me if you can.

Edit: Timing isn’t the only form of criticism i’m looking for, you are welcome to talk about whatever is on your mind here.

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#2

This just sound so good, gives me Mass Effect and Interstellar vibes…

I think it’s good as it is, it’s relaxing, perfect for a main menu

If you need more ideas on what to do next I have the perfect soundtrack for you:

It’s a piano tutorial for Interstellar’s soundtrack, it’s perfect, good luck!

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#3

Ah yes, interstellar. This sounds like the kind of thing I try to go for. Thank you for the reply and feedback, Im glad you like it.

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#4

Where? That’s too broad. It sounds like it’s a relaxing forest in the year 5060.

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#5

I was generally thinking about a game where you own your own space ship and explore planets freely. The song is supposed to capture a feeling of sci fi discovery and expansiveness, and still be mellow.

So for the where, just anywhere in space or with a sci fi vibe. Its not really anywhere specific, I was just trying to make it feel a bit expansive.
(I don’t have an exact idea of what the game itself will be, so I’m giving you this kind of unspecific answer)

#6

The song does not sound at all like that to me. It’s almost like it’s missing that part. I think you need more instruments to accomplish that feeling.

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#7

I think I might still be finding a way to describe it

Some extra instruments and making it longer still might help regardless, I did feel like something was off with the vibe before I posted it here.

Thanks for your time and feed back

#8

If there’s gonna be space battles put rock music (it’s perfect)

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#9

Looks like it’s an entire layer of pads, it could work but has more potential if you can add more elements. I only complain the slightly too powerful bass. To add more space, a reverb could work…

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