Hey! Another WIP drawing any ideas on how to make it look better? I think it looks a bit odd ish? I’m not sure how to fix it though, so I’d love some feedback! <3
I don’t know anything about anatomy but I think you could improve this part
I think it’s a bit long, but only in my opinion
Could you change the white background to black or something that contrasts more? I’m having a hard time looking at it.
cute sketch! I think the dress is supposed to be a fitted one with a slit at the end, just pointing it out since it seems like you drew ruffles on the dress. However, if they wanted it like that then it’s all good.
Also, the chest is a little uneven, especially the left side of the chest. I understand she is as an angle but I don’t think it looks right. I recommend you to maybe try make the left like the right since the left also seems like it is too high which is not realistic.
Overall I like her hair and the face shape is cute, it’s just a sketch so don’t stress out about it. Hope my critique wasn’t too harsh. 
That’s a pretty cute sketch, really good job so far! I know I’m not much of an artist myself, so I can’t really give too much major feedback on it, but I really do think that you’re doing a pretty good job so far. The chest is a bit uneven, as mentioned above- And they gave feedback on how to fix that- But, again, it’s an adorable drawing. Keep up the good work and keep working hard! 
