Hi guys, I’m still a bit new to drawing but here’s my recent art:
Something feels off about it (aside from background) but I’m not sure what’s wrong with it. Any feedback/suggestions?
Here is my reference:
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No detail in the ear.
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Shoulders should be down a lot more.
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The hat doesn’t look like it’s on her. There are no shadows.
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its nice, but adding on to @Crazedbrick1 There is no depth of the valk. It looks flat like cardboard on her head and the white stuff is too small. Over all its really good and the yes are amazing.
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ew that ear.
the head doesn’t fit with the body
the shoulders be too high
neck too long
the valk doesn’t look like its on there actually.
the lips look weird and you can barely see the nose.
Good, I mean it’s better than what I can do. But add shadow’s, make the hat look like it’s on it. Make the ear a bit more realistic . And bring the shirt up a bit.
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Yeah like everyone already said, just add shadows to create depth and it will look a lot more natural. Great drawing so far tho 
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I like it! I see you were trying to do like a shyish type of look so the shoulders would be behind her back or something close to her body, but the shoulders are way too high. The hat also looks like it was pasted on there.
Overall, it’s great! It’s only minor and not really noticeable mistakes. Keep up the great work!
- The hat looks weird as it is just on the top.
- The Hair Bunds should be higher.
- Chin is way too slim.
- Face needs to be a little larger.
- The ear might be a little to large.
- Maybe some shadows.
Other than that, it is amazing!
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I think you did a pretty good job on the line art but the drawing needs a little more shading. I’m not sure what your style is but I’d recommend adding shadows to the hat and hair as some other people mentioned before me. Keep working on your art though! ^^
Please don’t use the word “ew” as that’s rude, and disrespectful, if you want to give constructive criticism about their drawing, do it in a polite and helpful manner, thanks.
Good job on the drawing would however recommend darker and more pronounced shadows on the character and the hat, also try adding shading and possibly also highlights to the ear. In contrast, the linework, the eyes, and the hair are well thought out. Good work.
Please don’t necropost, it’s ten months old they most likely have moved on and fixed there work.
My bad, I didn’t even notice it was this old