Hey there! 
A friend and I made an egg hunt game that sadly ultimately was a flop. Curious on feedback as to what you feel may have been reason why / what you overall think of it if you wouldn’t mind checking it out! What do you feel could’ve made it better?
Thanks in advance!
When I joined it, I was on a spawn point in the middle of the void, and none of the buttons work. However, the UI design and i can tell from a distance that it looks quite nice. It may have flopped due to some bugs and the way you advertised.
Looks fine… For me I would add some free-ish things. You’re collecting chocolate bunnies, possibly make them a currency that can buy some things. As is it’s all pay…
This is just how I personally feel; Most everything in a game should be grindable even if you can buy it also.
Other than that it looks like a lot of work and flows real nice. Like most everything about how you did things.
Here are some reasons the game flopped, and what you can improve.
Lack of direction; a normal player wouldn’t be sure about where to go, it took me some time to realize that i had to buy keys to make the portals work.
The game not being named properly; When players hear ‘Egg hunt’ , most think about the official roblox egg hunts and by knowing that there aren’t any, they might think this game is just bait. I’d recommend renaming the game to ‘Find the eggs! (number of eggs)’
Lack of context; The add of something like a storyline could give players a feel of immersion and a reason to find all the eggs and progress through the worlds.
Experiment with different mechanics; I’d really recommend going ahead and experimenting with different mechanics such as puzzles etc… to obtain eggs. That could really spice up the gameplay and give the players something else to do other than just searching the map.
Advertise properly; May it be through online content, roblox ads, advertising on socials… It’s something that really determines the success of your game.