Electro-Ocean Sword

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#1

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#2

Very nice, I love the details on it. I think it would look a lot better if the blade was longer. It looks more like a dagger or knife with a cross-guard right now.

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#3

Hello!

You’r sword look really good, but why did you added gear? I mean, it’s futuristic ocean themed, gear mean steam punk themed, okay, futuristic style and steam punk are so cool when they are mixed, but you just said futuristic.
I think it’s more logic if you change the gear to spiral, or shellfish, like if the sword was loosed in the ocean.
(Also i love the color)

Anyway, you done an amazing job!

Have a good day.

#4

Very good, and the fact it’s made entirely in Roblox Studio makes it even better :smiley:

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#5

Very well done!

I’d agree with @NacosDnz on this one. Not only do they seem out-of-place compared to the rest of the design’s aesthetics, but the gears’ positioning is rather awkward, as well. I would suggest removing them entirely. Perhaps you could replace them with gems, or something more similar to the rest of the design’s natural look?

If you ask me, I would classify this as more of a dagger than a sword: the blade is just too short compared to the handle to be regarded as even a short sword.

Finally, a minor detail: in real life, that handle would probably hurt to hold, as it has almost serrated edges on both sides. However, if an avatar were to actually use this weapon, the handle wouldn’t really be visible, so I don’t have too much of an issue with it.

Hope this helped! Good work, by the way. :+1:

#6

Maybe look up steampunk or clockwork swords, Im not against gears on it but when you just have them in random spots it looks like someone glued gears to a halloween costume to make it look steam punk

#7

That looks pretty good for Roblox studio, the part on the gear is sticking out a bit.
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#9

Looks pretty nice I’d just add and remove a few things:

  • Longer Blade
  • Remove the coral seems a bit off
  • Add some sort of fish going around the blade like those cartoon birds after being hit in the head

Good work over all though!