ELEMENTS - Open World Tycoon [FEEDBACK]

[NovaPluma]

Hello everyone!

I recently released a new game called “ELEMENTS - Open World Tycoon”. Some users have already tried it however I would like to have some Feedback about the game in general (and also if there are any problems on mobile). Currently in the game you can choose between 4 different types of Tycoons and each Tycoon has a total of 3 floors.

This is the game link: ELEMENTS - Open World Tycoon - Roblox

If you manage to complete even last floor you will be able to unlock techniques like this :

Thanks for your time and support!

[PANDASonNOOB (BurgerNFries)]

wdym for hire???

oh yea and y in the world is the tycoon so darn far away

WHY IS THE CORNER SO ROUNNDDDDDD (and why is the X button barely on the UI, just make it completely off or mostly on, its really furstraing like this lol)

what in the world did you use to make this tree lol

THIS PATH, WHY, JUST WHY

make the electricity bigger, otherwise i doubt people would even notice it exists

gems??? how am I supposed to buy this if all I can earn is cash???

if I fall off this egde its totally gonna take me like 30 seconds to get back up

thats not a wall, its a door frame bru (nice model tho)

bru atleast take away the messy egde, if you cant, cover it with another part of the UI or something

Z-fighting, perfect

its so darn bright how am I supposed to see whats in it

the door really just makes it red? (ik its probably a kill part and all but still, add an actual door or something)

600 gems for this… (atleast make the lightning bolt look more like a bolt then 2 triangles)

why can i drop the gear???

the ability is cool, but “lightning”, really? not even 2 triangles in the box? just “lightning”?

if gamepass is gonna be pink, keep it pink, wasn’t gold supposed to be for premium?

thats not stairs, its a ladder, ITS NOT STAIRSSSS

why is the floor so thick???

its already so bright, why would I need more lights??

oh
lights? more like flashbang

Why, just why 3k gems for THIS

(whats the point of the big map? i cant reach anyone that way, making the weapons useless)

oh, so thats why it was so bright (why is it off by default tho?)

and whats so openworld about this? its just a big world that you cant do anything in, and your base…

its… just floating there… why… WHY

the electricity aura really is just a particle with “always facing camera” option turned on? atleast make it a model or an actual aura with more particles

IPER DROPERRRRR!!!

bro i have 15k gems gimme the darn superspeed

bro, is that cheese???

Bru superspeed costs 25k, not 15k

why does holding a yellow vial make me run fast

I dont understand how the cloud prison is supposed to work

again, those are ladders, NOT STAIRS

bru idk if those are just stupid lil kids or bots or someone’s alt but like, they seem like bots

[NovaPluma]

Thank you very much for your Feedback! This is my first game so I expected there to be bugs and things to improve.

To answer your questions:

1. “For Hire” in Tycoon games means that the player has just entered the game and still has to choose his Tycoon
2. It’s true, the Tycoons are a bit far from the spawn area. I did this to give the player the opportunity to explore the game world before reaching his base (however it might be a good idea to randomly teleport the player near an available Tycoon)
3. You are right, maybe I should make the “X” bigger and make the corner less round
4. Yeah, they’re cool trees XD
5. Don’t like the path?
6. Ok
7. I used generic cubes, however I may replace them with gems
9. Maybe I should change the name of the button
10. What is the “messy egde” you mean?
11. Just solved
12. If the shadows are disabled unfortunately the environment becomes very bright. I should do some tests with lights to see what works best
13. Yes, if it’s red the enemy players die, if it’s green they can pass
14. Ok
15. I just tested it but I didn’t have this problem. How did you drop the gear?
16. Ok, I’ll add something inside
17. The color of the “Auto Collect” gamepass changes according to the color of the Tycoon. Maybe that of the lightning I should make it darker or lighter
19. Because the building is very tall and therefore I wanted to make the floor a little thicker
20. As in 12)
21. As in 12)
22. The cost of the items is proportional to the floor. Books are an accessory object so you can also buy them at the end. However I might think about lowering the cost by 1K
23. I decided to disable shadows by default for any lag issues on all not very powerful devices. As for the map, I’m currently more focused on Tycoons. Even if the game is still incomplete you can still fight against Slimes and against other players. In the future I think I will add bosses and make the game more complete (however, will mobile devices be able to handle the game in the future or will I have to make the game exclusive to PC? That’s a good question )
24. I hadn’t noticed that. For some reason the base is somewhat raised above the ground.
25. Ok
26. Yes! XD
27. Fun Fact: you have chosen the only Tycoon with this problem . I checked and the correct price was supposed to be 15K not 25K. Sorry for the problem
28. That should be a yellow diamond
29. The “Cloud Prison” is supposed to trap the enemy for a certain amount of time and do a little damage to him while he’s inside. In Studio it works perfectly, in the game a little less because the terrain is not perfectly flat. Maybe I should think about changing the way the technique works.
30. I don’t know, I checked and maybe a couple of them might be bots but I’m not sure

[PANDASonNOOB (BurgerNFries)]

1. however, you arn’t being hired in this specific game, I would suggest changing that to something like “Choosing” or “Elementless” (or something like “mageling” if the player is supposed to be some specific type of character)
2. Theres not much to see outside there, the tree ares the same (not that big of a problem except that causes there to be nothing to really explore), a way to fix this could be to simply add sprinting
3. lol
4. cool but they are so darn bright lol
5. ITS YELLOW AND WITH THE TEXTURE IT LOOKS JUST… I CANT TAKE IT AAAAAAA
6. lol
7. No i mean that it says “gems” on the buttons (and on the GUI) but “Cash” on the leaderboard lol (and I would assume alot of people would look to the leaderboards first when playing a tycoon)
8. ig theres a wall that your supposed to buy tho, idk maybe add railings or a partly contructed wall (would look cool as well)
9. lol
10. the egde of the buttons are partly white. You most definitly used like photoshop or something, but dwasn’t able to cleanly take off the background lol
11. epic (for some reason they dont show up with “show shadows”, which is why I would assume you missed it
12. ye ik, and for some reason the game starts with shadows disabled lol (just make the time of day like dawn or dusk)
    13.yea but like even the other tycoons have the “laser” affect, you should add lightning bolts or something (even just particles would be nice)
    14.idk which one ur responding to lol
13. press delete (only works on computers)
14. would look way better : D
15. yea, idk really, but definitly dont keep it gold (or change the premium button to black, premium has a black color scheme now anyways)
16. too lazy to check what ur responding to lol
17. ig but it makes the tunnel to floor 2 kinda ugly lol (then again if u just round the egdes it should look fine)
18. ok
19. ok
20. the cost is fine techinically, its just I expected it to do something more then just, well, be books (maybe add like “cosmetic” in parenthesis behind the name or something)
21. I believe this game should be accessible to anyone with a device that was made after 2015 (im using a 2015 macbook air thats refurbished, the game didn’t even lag when I enabled shadows)
22. funi
23. it just looks funky right now lol
24. IPER DROPER DA BEST!!!
25. bru me when bad luck
26. but it really looks like cheese (like seriously, it looks like a slice of cheese, maybe its cuz its bright or something)
27. from trying to test, I was only able to see that it spawned a huge invisible box. The dimensions of the box are unclear, and for whatever reason, you can throw the orb THROUGH a wall (make it raycast or something so it don’t go through walls), oh yea, and maybe make th eparticles more focused on the sides of the wall, as otherwise, it would just look like a smoke grenade

didn’t manage to finish the game, but it seems cool

[NovaPluma]

Ok, I will try to improve the game following your advice. Thanks again for your help