Escape The Candy Store Obby (Should i change anything about the obby?)

Hello, People of the dev forum, The names Jake, i am Looking for feedback on my obby and, maybe some feedback on how i could make the obby better and get some people playing it, if you can help me with the people playing it, please hmu, Thank You!

https://www.roblox.com/games/4282602087/Escape-The-Candy-Store-Obby#!/about

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Feedback so far-
I’d make the respawn time a little less.

I just played through the whole thing and the modelling is great, the environments are really cool. One thing when i first went through a portal i started getting gui messages about getting to checkpoints which were really cool, was it intentional to leave them out at the first section of the game? Anyways I had lots of fun! Cool obby!

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I like what you’ve done here, this was a really fun, simple obby… coming from a player who has played about 20 obbies in his roblox lifetime I think this is suitable for new players who have just joined the game and are looking for a game to play! I have to agree on what @sealtodeal said though, why did the checkpoint guis show up after I went into the first portal?

Anyways, cool game nonetheless, happy developing!

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My only complainment is gui is kinda threw me of but overall your obby is very acceptable to play. If I was a new player, I would enjoy a bit.

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I know this a bit old but I lovee it. Quick quesiton, how you made the text box for the NPC’s? I find it really cool.
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Tysm, i hope the game gets big one day and Its a image i made actualy using rge everyday paint tool that is on every computer, and i imported it on roblox as a image ui on a invisible part and made the background transparent.

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