Escape The Diner Obby

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#1

Escape The Diner Obby Is Now Out By [Loyal Studios.
We Need Tips On How To Make The Game Better

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#2

Here is my feedback:

Pros of the game:

  • I love the detail of the game and the art put into it.

  • I love the effort and time put into this game as it shows.

Cons of the game:

  • The levels aren’t original. There have been multiple games like this in the past that look almost exactly the same see the links below for referance.
    https://www.roblox.com/games/1946695497/NEW-Escape-the-Butcher-Shop-Obby-READ-DESC
    https://www.roblox.com/games/2839467158/NEW-Escape-The-Diner-Obby
    Not trying to advertise these games; these games are just for reference purposes.

  • Glitch Feedback: The spawnpoint’s/checkpoint’s glitch when you die and respawn at them. You spawn in the floor like the image below displays.
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  • Glitch Feedback: On Level 7, when you’re running past the police cars you get stuck in the barrier and glitch to the other barrieecaded side of the level. There is no way to get out of here besides resetting your character, see the image below for referance.
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  • Glitch Feedback: On Level 7, I suggest making the part that makes the humanoids walk speed a speedrun walkspeed larger because players could mistake that as a kill part and jump over it and then it takes them a few minutes to complete the level.

  • On level 20 I think this is the ‘To Be Continued’ portion of this game but if not, there is a huge hole in the ventilations that needs to be patched unless there just isn’t the next level put in yet.

Other than that, overall, I think this game has potential if you get more players and make interesting and possible clickable advertisements for other Robloxians.

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#3

Ok, i will try to fix the checkpoints and, i checked out the games u sent. are you sure? i played them and there nothing like mine

#4

I might’ve linked the wrong games but I am sure I’ve seen games similar to yours.

#5

Ok, Well In My Opinion I Don’t See It Except For The Butcher Obby With The Text At The Top Of The Screen.

#6

Hey.

I don’t wish to come across as too harsh but your game is pretty generic. May I ask what increments you used while making this?There is parts (like above the doors) where u can see through the door. This game really doesnt have all too much detail, it is too easy and it isnt very enjoyable to play. The levels are pretty repetitive, just jump and run. Like CJ_Angel said, it is very similiar to other types of Escape games. On Stage 5 you can walk straight through the door, which makes me believe that you copy and pasted the doors without looking at whether you could phase through or not, have another look.

The respawn times are really long, and I don’t know if its my WIFI but right before respawning I spawn at the very beginning and then teleport to my Stage.

After a closer inspection at the walls I can see that you didn’t really check your build after making it, On some parts the wall goes through the Red and Yellow pattern, and on some cases the wall just has a gap in it. The walls overlap and is really noticeable when playing.

The UI is really simple and looks decent. Good job on that.

I believe this game has potential but it is lacking major proofing and details in places where it is crucial.

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