Hey, so I have been working on terrain for a bit now and have created this island for a temporary exploration type game, I would love positive and negative feedback on this! keep everything informational and helpful, thanks!
game link: (1) Exploration World v1 - Roblox
( Any suggestion’s for future game’s or ideas help too! )
(Pictures have been added! quality is low… I still suggest playing.)
It looks nice, but I recommend making a gui saying what you do, i expected some prize for walking 3 mins, but no, it would have been nice to have a warning
I agree with @Coolsbloxian, it’s a nice start however it is quite empty and unrewarding for walking around for 5 minutes. Would be nice to have some more structures, objectives and general things to do rather than walking around for the entire time you’re playing.
Understandable, it is purely for exploring currently as I am no scripter, but in the future I definitely plan to make some sort of quests and better the detail.
I think that there are 3 main things you should work on.
Bottles: I think that they should be made out of glass and be transparent, also some of them should be posed like they have fallen to the ground.
Materials: roblox materials don’t really match the map and game style, especially for the trees. Maybe use custom textures.
Trees: I believe that the trees made out of grass don’t really fit the map, if I were you I would make them in blender with a better foliage.
Last thing, maybe make the lanterns emit more light.
Overall good job!
Thanks for the feedback!
I will most definitely start working on changing the bottles, thanks for this.
Materials will change over time, coming with new buildings and quests.
Trees, I will keep this how they are as I like the how they are, I might change them into a different texture depending on the density on the fog on final release.
