Falling Avatar Graphic Feedback

A bored time in the day, so I made this simple picture of my avatar falling.


This time, I don’t actually feel bad making graphics design.

(The background is at https://wallpaperaccess.com/cartoon-sky , this picture is just a test on my skills I got before.)
As always, any criticism and feedback is always appreciated.

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Hello! Here are some suggestions:

RENDER Since he’s falling, I think you could make the pose a bit more dynamic. The limbs are stiff.

Maybe something like this?

LIGHTING The colors are pretty flat, so I think a little shading would make it look better.

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First off the colors make it look flat. And oh bloody heck this would have taken me 3 minutes to make. I think you are new and should watch some YOutube to get tips on how to make it better. Your welcome in advance.

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Aesthetics

The graphics design is okay, but I would recommend adding some kind of lighting and attempting to make the character slightly smoother as @Deeear demonstrated. And I would suggest attempting to use a HD sky background because this one looks a bit too ‘plain’.

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