Fancy Gate (WIP)

Hello! I am Luitenantcolonol, a builder from the U.S. A team of developers and I are currently working on a city game for a group. I was asked to build a palace gate, so that’s exactly what I did. When I came close to finishing I was told the build was too blocky and not realistic. Having a hard time believing this, I am going to ask you guys! I would enjoy some constructive criticism. [NOTE]: I ONLY used Studio for the build, as well as F3X.

Picture of Build:


Picture of Actual gate:image

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I like it a lot you did a great job on this. Overall great workmanship keep up the good work! :slight_smile:

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Thank you! I appreciate it a lot!

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It looks good, but there is always room for improvement if that’s what you’re here for.
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The spikes on the fence vary in height, and there are two bars which go across between the pillars - these pillars are not in your build, and could be a nice detail.

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The top of your gate is not very similar to the one shown - on here there are lanterns on the pillars and cool shapes on top of the gate to make it look more royal.

Just a couple things that you could improve to make it look more like the image and less blocky.

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Top of the gate doesn’t match the gate you made, but other than that it looks pretty good!

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It looks very nice, But I suggest adding more details and making the top less pointy.

I thank you all for your great advice, I will take this all into account and improve, thanks!

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I hope you build that building too and this Fancy Gate is looking great, well done, @Luitenantcolonol.

Honestly, the pillars of the gate matches pretty well, but the only problem it might have is that the actual gate isn’t that circular(the top piece of the gate), except for that, it resembles the gate pretty well.