I made a GFX for a game (200m) obby but you're a bird - Roblox.
So what is your feedback on it?
(In the last one i Just changed the font)
IDK why i made the bird shiny in the first one…
@Tychee101 you can use this if you want 
Thanks,
BasicButterBoy
I think you made a small typo with “Your”. Would prefer that you didn’t make the text look like an arc, for it to be read more easily.
Your GFX icons are seriously awesome! Love the style and creativity you’ve got going on there. The only problem is the spelling. It’s “Obby but YOU’RE a bird” not “obby but your a bird”. Apart from that, great job
I think the text should stand out more. You should also change the font and make it less flat (sorry for replying to you, meant to do it on the actual post lol)
As @SpaceGame_s said previously, the text should definitely stand out more! Maybe try adding more color to the text. I’m not a Graphic Designer but i think if “Obby” was written in yellow, or some sort, it would be better. Right now, it’s just a red phrase and it seems pretty weird to see on a GFX. Just try to play around with the text and see what looks good, be creative!
It’s a fairly basic icon and GFX. There’s a misspelling in it, which I see you’ve fixed in newer posts. Otherwise, the GFX looks alright.
To me the grey wall makes no sense, it would be nice to see some clouds or something to make it seem more like flying
Its based off the game. you have to clim a stud like wall! Thnaks for all the feedback guys!
I Recommend adding a VERY LIGHT gradient to the text and a 3D effect to it.
Love the basic style! And by the name of the game, it seems very promising.
