Feed back on my melody

It sounds like the main part of the song, so it should be emphasized more

The song is good, but you need to just work on equalizing it.

Yeah I am trying to work on that for the actual song. For some reason sometimes garage band doesn’t actually make the beats go together idk why. It’s just on mobile to.

I was also thinking to extend the melody a little bit

Please do not take it though it’s for my game.

I don’t recommend garage band. If your on mobile, there are websites that make better stuff. https://beepbox.co and Chrome Music Lab - Song Maker

I made that demo in a few minutes to show the author how desert songs should sound with beepbox

I have tried chrome music lab song maker but you limited to making stuff but garage band has more limits. And it’s not based off of a desert music it’s Korean traditional music mixed with a little hip pop

Yeah but the instruments are bad.

The ones that I did’nt download are bad the other I download or ok and sometimes good.

And ik it isn’t desert music, I was just showing you how beepbox was able to balance the sound. If you notice, the sitar is louder than the background stuff

I can turn down the volume and I am gonna make the whole. Song right now.

Increase the sound of the higher part, but decrease everything else

I know no ones gonna take it. So do not worry

Just in case there was the one person who toke my music once.

Add your watermark. Art has it, and so does music. Make a robot voice say ur username

That cymbal-like percussion thing sounds bad on the first beat of the melody. Maybe move it after the melody finishes. The rest is great.

Wouldn’t that sound the same when it loops?

Well if you play the drums like I do usually after the four or what ever measure mine is 7 you play a cymbal on the first beat on the first measure.

The dun-dun-dun part gets a little annoying, maybe turn that down a little bit so it doesn’t detract from the melody. Otherwise, it sounds awesome!