[FEEDBACK] 2nd Low Poly Island [CONECTED TO FIRST LOW POLY ISLAND]

Heyo i just made a new Island and connected it to my first low poly island! what do you think about it? Give me some Feedback Please!






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WOAH! Mass upgrade right here to go from your last one to this even that Being your first this is so good I love it no one can find nothing wrong with this. :wink: :123:

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This is nice, overall. But the tree’s are free models, I’d advise not using free models.
10/10 - without free models
7/10 - with free models.

I feel like you could also improve on lighting, and maybe change the water color to something a bit more darker.

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im working on own trees but i takes a while for me when the trees are done ill edit it!
Water will be done RN! Ty for your Feedback!

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Ty for your Feedback! at one of the pictures you can see that more is comming soon!

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In addition to what @Disparrel said, the grass seems a little to straight, meaning they are all in a straight line. Try making better clumps.

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I will edit this tommorow because it takes some time for me! Ty for your Feedback!

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Keep making this… KEEP making more I love this so much upgrade looks great. :wink: I need to see more of what you can do I don’t know if that’s just me but Hey I love it keep it up.

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i will because i love that feedback of everyone and Building is fun to me!

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You need to add something more to the ground, it lack detail in this particular area. Maybe try adding more grass, smaller rocks, holes in the ground, caves, ponds, etc.

I see that you are still a beginner in terrain. It’s look good for that. However i suggest you -

  1. Use more variety in trees to avoid it from looking repetitive.
  2. Add stuff like grass, rocks etc
  3. The island is a cylindrical piece. If possible you should make terrain with bricks (shouldn’t be a definite shape) and then wedge the terrain grass. If possible, could also use blender to make an island piece.
  4. Add elevations like ledges etc. It shouldn’t be all plain
  5. The ground looks plain, add more stuff as i mentioned above

Still not bad though :slight_smile:

This is not bad, it looks cool with these islands! Very cool. :sunglasses: :+1:

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This is amazing!! Keep up the great work!

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I love the islands. Such a unique idea. The lighting however could use some work, but it’s not bad overall! Love it

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it looks super I really like the windmill and the map looks like you put on too much work.Good job

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