[Feedback] 432 Park Avenue, NYC

Hello,

I am a new builder to ROBLOX and I have begun building famous skyscrapers from around the world. I have started with 432 Park Avenue, which is the second-tallest building in New York, and one of the thinnest in the world with a ratio of 1:15.

When I was building this, I wanted to simulate its reality as closely as possible, and add as much detail as possible.

I am looking to reap feedback so I can improve the build. I know it is not yet perfect, there are rooms for improvement.

Progress:

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Build

Thank you very much!

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Thats incredible, you can improve colors or adding custom textures so it can look better!

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Thanks, I was also thinking about that. Could you tell me it’s worth too?

Yes it is, i was building with Roblox textures and with custom ones. Custom ones went much better than Roblox textures so i recommend it.

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As someone who works nearby, I can say that you did a really good job on making it look real!

This is against the DevForum rules so I’d ask you to remove this part from your post.

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Ha ha, sorry about that. Won’t do it again :+1:

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Great job the only little thing is the skyscraper looks too tall other wise its awesome!

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Hello,

It cannot be too tall as it is all matched to the scale of the skyscraper.

Thanks for your reply,

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Because this design is a literal building IRL, I can’t necessarily judge the design because it’s pretty accurate already. I think, if you’re going to make a full showcase of these buildings, you should make a surrounding area like a mini-city and add some greenery.

Another thing you should maybe keep in mind is the part efficiency, especially with the windows. Instead of using one part for each window, you should make them all one part per each section of windows. If you’ve already done this then I probably have nothing else to say. Good luck with your project!

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Thanks for the feedback, yeah, I understand where you’re coming from.

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I think you should fill the empty spaces (the one with no windows) Screenshot_20200128-134205_Google like they did in real life, overall the build looks really good.