[FEEDBACK] A new graphic i made for practice and messing around with overlays

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#1

hey! i’m prostranskii. i use cinema 4d R17 for rendering and edit in photoshop cc2020

here’s a graphic i made in a relatively short amount of time to mess around with some overlays i found.
any feedback would be greatly appriciated!

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#2

Looks great but there is to much black. Mostly the black background just makes everything blend together, try lighting the tone of the black up a bit.

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#3

hey, thanks for the feedback! it originally wasn’t that dark but it looks weird with that effect with a light background / overall theme to the picture. because i was testing around with this effect in specific i changed my photo to work better with that.

it’s more of a light in darkness kinda vibe

#4

Looks awesome!

Here’s my suggestions:

  • One, make the blue a shade dark, and add a darker feel to everything.
  • The render itself, (character), should have a different face than the regular default face.
  • Make it so we can see the pants of this character, otherwise it just looks strange.

Enough of me going on about the critiques of this master piece, here’s the things I like about it:

  • Everything for the most part just fits in together really well.
  • The text is boss, not going to lie.
  • That hat! Looks odd, and amazing at the same time.
  • The twirls of blue, just pull this piece together!
  • As well as the font of the text.

In all, 10 out of 10. Amazing.

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#5

Very nice! Everything fits together and the render is incredibly sleek! 10/10!

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#6

hey dis, thanks for the feedback! i love getting this kinda feedback because it gives me a lot of information on how i can improve.

i’ll see what happens if i change the blue color, but i messed around with it for a while and it looked weird being dark.

i have this problem a LOT when making renders or just outfits in general, finding roblox faces that go with a theme look kinda weird…

there are no pants as the legs are all black so the pants are there, you just cant see them lol

thank you for the positive feedback as well!

#7

hey sizzle! forgot to actually finish typing this lol

thank you for the praise on the render! i just got a new lightroom today and decided to put it to the test! im glad you noticed lol. <3

#8

it was looking but there was a question I want to tell…what is the meaning of the title.

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#9

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

i really couldnt tell you :confused:

#10

Where did you find the overlays?