Feedback! a part of my game

good?

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I’m very impressed by the buildings. The only critique I have is that the roads and that area in-between them seem make the rest of the environment look a little bit dull.

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Very colorful I can say is not bad is actually very good, but for the buildings you should have choose better colors in my opinion. They look very childish, like from a cartoon. Depends for what are you aiming for. Good work buddy!

ok ty for feedback! I will try to fix it

Yes! this looks very cartoon. this is actually an escape game. That’s why we wanted it to look cute
ty for feedback

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Very nice low-poly style!

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thank you for feedback! :smiley:

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A bit too much of the bright colors lol, but overall good

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THANK YOU SO MUCH!
I agree with you c:

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The low poly design and the cartoony colouring looks great :eyes:

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I feel like it’s a bit too bright, try decreasing the lighting brightness, everything else is good but i suggest adding some detail here image
because the grass transitions instantly to a road which makes no sense, i would add a gate to make it look like a park and add a sideway in front of it.

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thank you so much bro i will fix it!

thank you for feedback!
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If I were you I would use a darker shade of yellow on the bus. In my opinion it is a little bit too bright.

Looks great, a bit bright though.

is it okay now?

Yeah definitely, good job! It’s way better now.