Hello,
Recently I make this Showcase:
Can you give me your feedback about my creation.
I am a beginner modeller. Please take this into account
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There isn’t that much information put into your thread are you just wanting feedback on the lava or the entire layout of the map? The lava looks fine but you should strive for more of a yellow-ish color instead of it being completely red of which the showcase or map is quite unfinished and a bit early to request feedback.
It would be helpful if you finish it so users can provide criticism and useful feedback if your wanting a cartoony lava it seems you already accomplished it perhaps add cracks through, the rocks so the lava looks like it open the rock a bit rocks aren’t randomly place in lava.
Since this is your attempt of a cartoony lava, it’s alright! The style of it looks very here and there include a volcano in the background with lava running down the mountain parts and cracks through the ground and different formations include lava rocks burnt up, it’ll bring that approach your seeking to achieve.
You could try working on adding the little bits of things, because it’ll make the build stand out. Then right know even if your just starting out or learning the modeling process. 
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