i have low expectations of this game but ITS THE MOST POPULAR GAME THAT I MADE with 1500 visits previous games had under 20 visits
link:Obby of Madness - Roblox
link:Obby of Madness - Roblox
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I have 5 main problems with the game,
i.
The messages sent by the server in chat have spelling and grammar mistakes, make sure to fix that.
ii.
The game has no music, without music, the game feels empty. Add some cartoony music to fit the vibe.
iii.
The game has no UI, it seems very empty, a way you can monetise it by adding a skip stage button or a gravity coil.
iiii.
The whirlpool to world 2 doesn’t work, if your still working on it, put a coming soon sign.
V.
Some of the stages seem very hard and some are easy, some jumps are too long to make for the average player or for a mobile player for example.
Bonuses:
The animations really annoy the experience, a slight adjustment of the character can kill you, try spacing out the level design or changing the walking animation.
Make the game icon, thumbnail and description better.
For example, the thumbnail is offset from the middle, making it look unprofessional or rushed. Blender can help with the thumbnail and the icon. And the generic “Welcome to the obby of madness” seems boring and without punctuation. You can ask ChatGPT to write you a game description and maybe put extra information about it as well.
I would also add saving levels, or at least saving worlds, because I rejoined the game and my progress reset, think if a player got kicked because of their internet or other reasons, would be annoying to redo everything again, wouldn’t it?
Other than that, seems good, make these changes, and you can advertise it again!
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i absolutely forgot about description and thumbnail and icon was made long time i thought about it also gui is wip im not sure about skip button also gui is wip and there are gamepasses and with music there are issues and ill think about animation and ill go fix grammar now
At least you have game passes, but advertise them in the game, so people can buy it in the game directly.
like i said gui is wip (there is bug that when you join it covers all screen)
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So i looked through and found this on the group
I got a small issue with this
According to the roblox community guidelines
You may not share the invite code on the announcement since it can be accessed to under 13 which could get you moderated for directing users off plattform. Social links are hidden for people under 13
This also goes for in-game so im guessing you would need to change it before something happens and would need to use the PolicyService API
fixed i think under 13 will not see it anyway but it looks anyway bad
hey im allowed it says except for:… discord idc at this point anyway
Read this:
“Links to any of those approved sites must be wrapped in the applicable PolicyService API or listed in the Social Networks and Social Links settings of your profile or experience description page. Links (including those to approved sites) that appear in locations where the API cannot be deployed - such as text chat or embedded in media - are prohibited unless expressly authorized by or in partnership with Roblox.”
Also players under 13 are able to see announcements i checked
Just making sure you won’t be moderated for it
like i said i don’t care at this point really but thanks i forgot about that i could get banned
Feedback? I would suggest that you make the passes have a similar style for their icons. Right now it looks like you copy and pasted.
Yours:
More similar:
Taken from Don’t Press the Button 4
well it isn’t exactly from that game i wasn’t who was getting icons i also forgot about update them also i think that’s a common pattern
i expected more feedback about game lol i think now there must be a list what to do when updates will be made and new games that will be made of scratch