Feedback about port for my Convoy game?

This is my port for my convoy game, I am a scripter but I want to branch out into building.




How does it look?
What should I change?
What should I add?
FYI the Liberty ships (ships) are placeholders for an updated version I am going to build.
If I did anything wrong DM me, and we can sort it out.
Other than that have a nice day! :wink:

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Wow that looks really incredible! If the Setting’s temperature is supposed to be cold outside, then you did a really nice job with the fog!

Nothing that I see that could be changed! :open_mouth:

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Thanks! It took me about 2.5 hours to build, and about 30 minutes to script. I think I am going to add a building behind the boxes, maybe a warehouse?

Looks great! In my opinion, I feel like it would look nicer with a darker murkier fog since it’s a port but it looks awesome.

Did you script the cranes to move? If so that would be dope.

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I am going to, but I actually scripted a cargo system (the ship pulls up and if you press ‘E’ then it will unload cargo from the ship.)

It’s a bit blocky, but has a good silhouette. I think you should consider giving it a bit more surface area. Currently there’s not enough space to actually load or unload anything.

Oh cool! It reminds me of the Merryweather heist in GTA where you have to rob a port

Yeah, I was thinking the same thing but I’m assuming you are still working on it.