Anything i could change or add?
Haven’t posed the hand and the gun yet
The fire on the asteroid looks like if a image was pasted on a weird mesh part maybe try reworking on that. Other than that this looks good imo.
The background feels a bit empty, why not adding galaxie spiral at the background or other things to feel it more like space.
It’s fairly decent, however the fire coming out of the asteroid doesn’t look realistic and looks like it was a mesh pasted on. Maybe touch that up a bit, and otherwise it looks really good!
The Good
• I like the theme of the commission!
• The lighting is well placed. Good job on that!
The Bads
• The fire on the asteroid looks very unnatural, like an image pasted onto a mesh.
• The background is too empty. I would recommend adding more planets, or some distant galaxies to mix it up.
The Conclusion
Awesome job! You’re really good at making GFXs, but you can always improve. I would definitely recommend you to create commissions for people.