[Feedback and critique] WIP thumbnail commission

Anything i could change or add?


Haven’t posed the hand and the gun yet

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The fire on the asteroid looks like if a image was pasted on a weird mesh part maybe try reworking on that. Other than that this looks good imo.

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The background feels a bit empty, why not adding galaxie spiral at the background or other things to feel it more like space.

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It’s fairly decent, however the fire coming out of the asteroid doesn’t look realistic and looks like it was a mesh pasted on. Maybe touch that up a bit, and otherwise it looks really good!

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The Good
• I like the theme of the commission!
• The lighting is well placed. Good job on that!

The Bads
• The fire on the asteroid looks very unnatural, like an image pasted onto a mesh.
• The background is too empty. I would recommend adding more planets, or some distant galaxies to mix it up.

The Conclusion
Awesome job! You’re really good at making GFXs, but you can always improve. I would definitely recommend you to create commissions for people. :+1:

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