Feedback and ideas on Unfinished (Story game lobby)

Hello! I’m currently working on a lobby for a train based story game that I might or might not complete. It’s currently unfinished. All Feedback, Opinions, Ideas Etc Are very very welcomed. I’m aiming for a fun type of look that will catch the player’s eye. If anything looks like it should be removed, replaced, moved, or something else all together, let me know! Also this is my first post on here so if anything is messy forgive me. ](upload://Ad0qJOGbOsBhL8wnu9fcRbI9bHU.png)

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That is stunning, building skill I can never achieve great work keep it up!!! :sweat_smile:

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I like the building here. The level of detail you put looks amazing.

Overall, it looks great.

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I really love the building, definitely looks like a game I would play. I like the detail and the set up is good. Great job, keep up the great work! No negative comments.

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Thank you everyone for your kind words of encuragement :smile:. It has been quite a lot of work to get to this point as I’m doing it solo. So I’m learning as I go only have been developing for around a year and still a lot to learn.

Looks like a good setup just really dont enjoy the brick texture. Feels very over used but idk how to give you any idea on how to fix it. Concrete works very well to split the textures up with you wanna try that.

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Bro, it looks cool! All I could say is this: :smirk:

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Thank you for the tip Ill be sure to test somethings out.

Add A Leaderboard and more decorations along with some sound effects are you might be ready to go

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Definitely looking forward to adding those things and more thanks for the comment.

Really reminds me of one of those old Victorian-style railway stations. Really good! Though since it’s a dead end, you might want to consider adding buffers at the end of the rail.

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Its a little empty, if it’s a train station, maybe add benches, seats or signs with train dates and and time arrivals (just something to make it more alive and realistic) I like the overall build you made.

also for these, maybe add coal inside it because that’s how a train operates maybe. Just a thought
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Yes of course, Like I stated in the title it is unfinished. Yes I will consider some of your suggestions as they are very good ones thank you very much for your comment! :smile:

This is great! The trains detail is insane! You really put your effort and time into this! Great job!

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I love this design! I think that it is very distinctive and well built. When I think of a train station I think of something like you have built. Keep up the good work. :+1:

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I love your work! It looks pretty good! However I think some flowers or some more bushes wouldn’t hurt! It would simply make it look better! also if you need a builder. contact me! ZakrapGamingYT#8981

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