Hello everyone! I just created this quick build it took not so long to make, and I wanted to get some opinions on it. Please feel free to give feedback, or criticism. The game link will be posted below this thanks for the help! 
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I love it, its well made and does not look like a quick build!
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For a quick build- it simply looks… well… quickly built.
It lacks any features on the exterior except for a roof type structure of the front porch. Perhaps start there in improving the build. Add window frames, a door, and misc plants around the house to begin. There’s not a whole lot to critique on the build in general considering it looks unfinished. Add more features that are present on a house basically.
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Looks like a very nice miniature build, maybe consider making it larger, and possibly even adding interior or some exterior and more details on the walls. Really like it though, keep on building!
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Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it! You made some good points on how it looks unfinished, but overall, thanks for the suggestions.
Thanks, I was thinking about making it bigger, but I was thinking of making a trailer park type mini game, thanks for the feedback!
Thanks for the feedback! 
The house, looks very details like all the decorations you. Added to the house and the outside part. But there seems to be. More stuff you could add to it to, look more better and decent here is a couple of things to add!!
House
The house looks very detailed and very well done but there seems to be no windows added to it. And it’s looks very plain i would suggest! you add some windows on the side part and implement some in the front part to look more better. As well you could add some details to the front area like some bushes, rocks, flower. ect. And the front porch looks a little to small you could scale it a bit more as seen below!!
Air Conditioning
As well the conditioning, doesn’t quite have much to it you could add cuts in the top. So the air could come out. And add some wires around it and in the inside part! to give it a little more details. As by looking at it it’s covered by a white part i would, recommend you remove that, add different details to it to look more better!! Overall it looks really good but it’s a little unfinished and doesn’t have that much decorations to the house…
Aside all of that. The build looks really good and as said above! you could make it a bit more larger so you could add more details, to it you have done a great job on your house. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks for the feedback, and support! I will take your ideas into consideration! Thanks for the help!
Wow, it looks pretty good for being built so quickly!
Keep up the great work! 
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Yeah it was done pretty quick, ahah! Thanks for the support!
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The windows are the obvious thing here that should be improved on, as it really sticks out from the house as being barren.
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Dude! This instantly made me think of an artists cottage.
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I think it’s a great design thus far, but I also want to expand improving its charm. The image I provided has southern architecture influence, which I believe matches well with the design you have so far. Now I’m going to go over the cottage’s design success, and hopefully you might find them useful in using to your own project.
Light colors/ Windows
The light colors are sort of godly, the light blue top in many southern designs was originally meant to detour ghosts. Anyway, these light colors give a very vivid and welcoming essence. The light blue matches really well with orange-red lights in windows from a photographers perspective because they are complimentary and stand out. I suggest editing the windows colors to take advantage of that aspect.
Material
Your house doesn’t involve any materials, which is completely fine because your style may not include material textures. But I think wood would be very beneficial, especially like a chestnut light brown wood.
Structure/ Small details
I think some of the windows are a little too close to the edge of a wall to look good on the interior so they also look a little awkward on the outside. I would give a 0.8-1 stud margin for this at least. The porch could also wrap around to the right of the building as an option if you’d like a bigger porch. Theres also a collision with the porch and the wall on the right side. I would also keep the base floor of the building level with the porch.
Anyway that wraps up all I can think of, Amazing build! Really like it, great job!
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Thanks for the awesome suggestions! I will definitely use them for the build, thanks!
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Yeah, I agree with you on that. I am going to change them to a more fitting style. Thanks for the help!