Feedback and what should I add for the thumbnail/GFX for my game

Andrewthebeast3284 · January 9, 2021, 2:14am

I get that it is very bare and I don’t know what else to add what do you think? I think I should add some effects maybe but what effects?

IProgramForFun · January 9, 2021, 2:17am

This is great an all but whats wrong with his arm though

Andrewthebeast3284 · January 9, 2021, 2:21am

He is confused and doesn’t know where the key is in front of him kinda like this but in a confused sort of way:

it looks a little too warped now that I see it

IProgramForFun · January 9, 2021, 2:23am

Ohhh I get it; sorry didnt notice

IProgramForFun · January 9, 2021, 2:24am

Yeah it kinda looks like someone just stretched his arm out in every direction

Andrewthebeast3284 · January 9, 2021, 2:26am

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IProgramForFun · January 9, 2021, 2:27am

dude dont think about it like that man; dont compare

Andrewthebeast3284 · January 9, 2021, 2:29am

I know I am just playing around

IProgramForFun · January 9, 2021, 2:32am

Oh I thought you were for real

Dev_Carlitox · January 9, 2021, 2:36am

You should add the arm and improve the illumination, not bad.

CJ_Angel · January 9, 2021, 2:37am

It looks great! I would suggest changing the shirt into a more business-type shirt to fit the scene.

Andrewthebeast3284 · January 9, 2021, 2:38am

He is just a player in the escape room game in an office setting he is looking for the key. Should i make that more apparent? @Dev_Carlitox Thanks I will

99ior · January 9, 2021, 2:40am

You should maybe add a safe in the wall?

Andrewthebeast3284 · January 9, 2021, 2:40am

Thanks, you know what that is a great idea, I use safes A LOT in my game.

99ior · January 9, 2021, 2:41am

You could also add a code lock somewhere in the backround, or an electronic lock.

Andrewthebeast3284 · January 9, 2021, 2:42am

Maybe but when i use combination locks it is a ScreenGui. I will stil consider your idea though, Thanks.

99ior · January 9, 2021, 2:43am

Okay, but you could still add some code looking lock. Ex:

Andrewthebeast3284 · January 9, 2021, 2:45am

Ohhhh I see what you mean, it doesn’t really matter to me what safe I use so if you think people will like that better then I will go with it.

99ior · January 9, 2021, 2:45am

Yeah, I suggested a code lock since it’s one of the most common.

CJ_Angel · January 9, 2021, 2:51am

Oh, alrighty. In that case, it’s all good!