[Feedback] Any constructive criticism on my digital art?

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#1

I started digital art around 5 years ago, and I would like some constructive criticism to help me improve.

This drawing is of a roblox character:

limitedsmoothiie
limitedsmoothiie1296×1000 1.16 MB

This drawing is fanart of an undertale character:

frisk
frisk1280×1427 2.07 MB

Both were made with Adobe Photoshop

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#2

PERFECT

That looks perfect enough for me! No improvement suggested.

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#3

The second one looks AMAZING! It’s so clean too! The second one doesn’t convince me very much, maybe because I don’t like these kind of arts. Really great job!

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#4

Both are really amazing, I do prefer the first one more though, I feel like it has a really nice touch to it that makes it unique.
I honestly don’t feel like you need any improvements all I’m going to say is keep up the wonderful work this is really stunning.

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#5

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The Art you have made here are looking good and also not only it look great but also it really touch the felling of the art itself.not only you to me but you also attracted to our community and that was the good thing about your art and i was wondering … how long it will take you to finish once piece of art?
Very nice work and keep it up, i love too see more creation by you. keep up the good work,ok. :+1:
That all for now and i will see you on the next reply…

Seeya!

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#6

Thank you! And to answer your question, it takes either hours or days depending on the piece.

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#7

They both look really well made to me.

#8

Your drawings are very good, I’m more of a semi realistic art style fan but hey everyone have different taste, here’s your criticism:

  • Improve your perspective, in the first drawing the face are slightly more slanted than the head, try drawling a line between the jaw and then a line between the eyes to see the difference.
  • Exaggerate your gestures, in the second drawing, you could make the pose more organic by exaggerating the hands more.
  • Do not over detail your drawing, in the second drawing, the folded clothes around the neck are simply way too complex and overdone, you could fix it by just adding large folds of clothes instead of a bunch of hard to see lines for cleaner and better result.
  • Show more shadows, in the second drawing your shadows are everywhere, if the only direction where there is no light source is the top left, then try to find places that wont get hit by it, show the surface and the curvature of the object using the shadows.