Feedback appreciated on my first 2D artwork

[RandomNoMan (radical)]

Hola boys and girls
Now before I continue just wanted to say that I have never tried 2D art before and that this is my first somewhat finished piece, so try not to be extremely critical if it’s not great D=

Anyhow, here is the piece =D

I kinda like patchwork stuff, so I thought i’d try draw a person in somewhat rundown and patched up clothing.

Lmk what you think

[poyotsu (shrimp)]

Hey! A little late but, I think it looks great I love the coloring. I can tell that you were going for the more blocky style but what I recommend it proportioning out the body to the head and less of a round head and bit smaller. Something alike to this? ( Credits to the artist lovely art )