Can i please have feedback on this vest im doing for a commission he is paying 200 robux for this.
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Very cool, the top parts by the shoulders look a little choppy though.
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He specifically said the upper torso only so i hope that is what he meant
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It looks very nice. I’d say that the torso can be improved by adding stripes like the ones found on the reference. However, I like it. 
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Do you think its worth the 200 robux hes paying for it?
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I think the chestplates should be a bit wider and come closer to reaching the middle. 
In the reference there is basically just a buckle attaching the two of them, but in the model there is nearly enough room to fit another chest plate between the two. Also I would rework the topology because the shading is a bit weird.
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i think the shading is just a bit weird because a shade smoothed it and its using evee render instead of cycles in cycles it looks much better, ill make them wider too
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does it look better ive made the chest plates bigger?
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Looks much better in my opinion, but keep playing with it until you like it.
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i like it i just want to make sure im not ripping him off
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Greetings. My apologies for not replying a bit sooner. I might pay a bit more than R$200, as the detail isn’t really bad. I’d say that it’s worth more than R$200. Also, how are you doing?..
Hi thanks for the reply, what do you mean by how am I doing, like how far I’ve got into work?
I am using blender to do them if that’s what you mean
Greetings. Perhaps I wasn’t clear… I was asking, “how has your day been?”
Ah, that’s quite nice. Well, how are you doing?.. 
My days are mostly all meh because I have depression and anxiety so… yeah
Oh, well I hope you do well. Do you have discord by any chance?..
I do 1 minute I’ll dm you it on forum
Awesome! That is completely awesome, Honestly that could be worth more then 200 robux maybe up to 300?
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That’s cool well the guy really likes it so that was good 
How long did it take you to make?