Feedback at my first gun model

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#1

Feedback for this gun, is the first i made so feedback appreciated,

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1809Γ—352 104 KB
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HASDSA
HASDSA1061Γ—501 164 KB

what i should upgrade? :smiley:

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#2

@DapperFoxySWAT I love this, Its very clean and I think its perfect! :slight_smile:

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#3

@DapperFoxySWAT This looks great, especially for a first model. I assume the gun which you were modelling is the M16A1 rifle, and all things considered its a very good remake. I think an area for improvement would be the end of the barrel. On the actual gun in real life, the barrel extends beyond the handguard. If you don’t understand what I mean, try to search a picture of the gun online. Aside from the barrel, this is a great model and much better than my first one. Keep up the good work!

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#4

Thanks for your feed, i really appreciate it :slight_smile:

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Making a scary game
#5

Searches image online FBI OPEN UP

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#6

For a first time gun model this is pretty good, but what you should probably do is to smoothen out of the barrel so the verts aren’t visible. Besides that it looks fine. Good work!

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#7

It’s great for a first model, but the lack of a barrel and the cut off magazine is very weird. Plus, there is an unnecessary use of bevel and a deformed clamp bar.

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