[FEEDBACK] Café Build

Hello, I made a cafe build. What do you think?
(cafe build feedback - Roblox)
Here are some screenshots:


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I like it but its not low-poly. This theme tends to be more cartoony and have a low amount of polygons into it, this instead of beign what did i say before its someting more realistic after all there are a lot of details puted into it.

Here some examples of low poly Roblox buildings:

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https://www.google.com.ar/imgres?imgurl=https%3A%2F%2Fi.ytimg.com%2Fvi%2FBRcgvlqTYmM%2Fmaxresdefault.jpg&imgrefurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DBRcgvlqTYmM&tbnid=9sP0ZsWxgetH_M&vet=12ahUKEwjh2ZeTnvfoAhUjDrkGHfEuCAYQMygCegUIARDgAQ..i&docid=-HrQc9rG5isV5M&w=1280&h=720&q=roblox%20low%20poly%20buildingas&hl=es-419&gl=ar&ved=2ahUKEwjh2ZeTnvfoAhUjDrkGHfEuCAYQMygCegUIARDgAQ

https://www.google.com.ar/imgres?imgurl=https%3A%2F%2Fdoy2mn9upadnk.cloudfront.net%2Fuploads%2Fdefault%2Foriginal%2F4X%2F7%2F3%2F5%2F7357e76bb0a8d32d976e0c4e99baba73a11b3f17.png&imgrefurl=https%3A%2F%2Fdevforum.roblox.com%2Ft%2Fclosed-hiring-low-poly-style-terrain-map-creator-40%2F297586&tbnid=Su7oV0kvkGt6_M&vet=12ahUKEwjc2b73nffoAhW-DLkGHcLsBDYQMygNegUIARD7AQ..i&docid=XRMLUI0Saomw2M&w=1263&h=672&q=roblox%20low%20poly&hl=es-419&gl=ar&ved=2ahUKEwjc2b73nffoAhW-DLkGHcLsBDYQMygNegUIARD7AQ

They are all from Google images lol

This is pretty good, but I’d suggest adjusting the lighting on the ceiling. Also, maybe try adding some more detail to the ceiling because on the right end, it’s pretty plain overall I got a couple of suggestions that could improve your build.

The interior is pretty decent I like the design, in my opinion, the tables/chairs are all the small colors and same models I recommend adding different chairs so it could look more realistic for a cafe I would try adding things onto them like a table cloth, cups, plates, small potted plants, and more however the exterior looks rather empty it won’t hurt to add some details around the area like a potted plant or some more chairs and tables.

The ceiling and walls, feel too empty. I do suggest placing more decorations around it or possibly try getting other ideas from images. Here’s my suggestion: add some hanging decorations around the ceiling, such as pictures, mâché wall signs, plant’s, wall lights, something that represents the cafe, you could go wild with the decoration however I’ll just add simple details.

Other than that it’s looking really good as well, your not allowed to sell assets here on the forum I’ll remove it so others are aware.

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Hey! Your place is un-anchored.

Unfortunately you’re not allowed to sell assets on the forum anymore as it is classified as spam.

Any chance you need an Ordering System?

Looking good! Try low poly, As it’s common with Cafe builds, In fact, makes the build look better. However, building a realistic is fine. Your personal choice!

I love it, there is a lot of details going on, but I agree with the rest, it looks a little too poly, maybe try adding things to make it more realistic? plants, couches, etc…

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Looks really good!
How long has this taken you to make?

That’s pretty good! You could possibly sell it or use it to make café group, and my feedback is its a bit of a closed in space maybe you could make it the size of an average café!

Looks pretty good! Well done. :+1:

Looks good, I like it! Are you planning on adding anything to the exterior like trees/bushes or paths to walk around?