I’m attempting to make a Cartoon house really for fun.
I need some feedback on my build please. It really helps, improves my builds as a developer.
I have no checked the Wiki simply because I just need feedback.
Hi, I’m TempestGlacier I’m a builder and I need some feedback on this cartoon house build. First time posting a topic and using devforum.
Overall i think its ok. I would personally change up the windows and make each one different. I also find the roof a bit. Weird. I would change the color and scale it a bit more, and the chimney in my opinion is pretty weird and doesnt really fit in with the rest of the build.
Thanks, I’ll change the lighting and edit the windows and the roof I’ll fix up the roof a bit too thanks!
It looks good, I will change the chimney it looks kinda Weird change the Chimney BrickColor so it doesn’t match with the roof. As Turtlepla said to make the windows different. But overall looks Good!
Also, this is my first post so if there are grammatical errors am sorry
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As mentioned above, I suggest you change the chimney. In addition, the windows and the plants look clearly repetitive, so you might want to change that too. Other than that, it’s a decent build. GLHF!
Like the uniqueness of the windows, and the shape you are trying to go for. I would say though the front looks very 2D and you could enhance the shape of the building with corner wedges which is located in advanced objects or in packs in the model store! Other then that nice stuff!
It’s alright, but the windows need to look different from each other rather than them all just going into the same direction, the chimney looks kind of wack although your going for a cartoon house for fun. You should adjust the chimney a lot more. The entrance can also use some work, you could add a welcome mat. Anything really to spice it up a bit, rather than it looking not that great. You should also change the color up a bit, considering it looks very strange at the moment.
It’s very different, that’s what makes it special. I like it, but you should work on window frame.
In my opinion, it’s pretty nice!
Color scheme is weird, but great concept though! 