[FEEDBACK] Character

I just made this piece of artwork. How could I improve?

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Well to be honest, the character which you made in the picture looks pretty impressive. I appreciate the way you made this artwork.
Though, my suggestion is that you make the black lines a little bit thinner because thy’re to thick and may give the artwork not such a good appearance. Though I really appreciate this and hope you make this better!

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I’m unsure whether the white parts on the sword is intentional, but either way, I suggest you paint it accordingly to the shape of the blade. To explain further, you should look up pictures or tutorials on how to paint metal (or more specifically, a sword). GLHF!

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It looks great to me! I think that if you added some shadow to the side of the sword and character, it could give more dimension.

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Looks fine to me, you could probably make thumbnails for “a generic roleplay gaem” or something related to that.

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I love the drawing, and I see your interest is there! I recommend decreasing the thickness of your line-art, and looking at YouTube videos in digital art to teach you some tricks and things that’ll help you take your art to further levels!

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